I looked them all over, and the drawings in general look great. One thing I noticed however, is that you have a habit of drawing eyes really wide, not in an 'anime' kind of way, but as if most of the characters look shocked or surprised all the time. One thing to remember is that we humans are varied in our appearance. Even if you have a style that you adhere to, it's good to vary things. The smallest change can make a dramatic difference. Some slender eyes here, wide eyes there, thin lips here, thick ones there, smaller nostrils, larger ones; you get the idea. Not that the characters don't look distinct, but I think you could take it further.
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Thanks for your input. I have a lot of frustration about my work, and I can never pin point the reason for that feeling. Thanks for shining a light on it.
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maybe you should try to give the eyes lightreflexs.
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